tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post1578250514036744791..comments2023-06-14T07:31:39.955-06:00Comments on The Beehive: Chapter 1.3: Que Sera SeraOwl Facehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13697227504678375230noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-3798958886936796592013-07-25T00:34:56.586-06:002013-07-25T00:34:56.586-06:00I seriously adore your writing. I can picture ever...I seriously adore your writing. I can picture everything (aside from seeing it in pictures, I mean!). I really love Luke, too, even if he's a ridiculous sort of meathead. He's so fun. (: I hope Polly doesn't get caught by the Alyconians, yet-her interactions with humans are a blast to read.Anonymous Misshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01773497983723569866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-63499183127078716462013-07-16T18:37:18.768-06:002013-07-16T18:37:18.768-06:00This chapter made me laugh in several places. It&#...This chapter made me laugh in several places. It's interesting to see Polly interacting with humans, so I'm really enjoying that. I don't know how I feel about Luke yet, so my judgement will have to wait on him. Like I said in a previous comment, I liked Crux, and hope to see him again soon. JessicaxRockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596780597892263881noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-45660765283554936802013-07-12T23:36:30.553-06:002013-07-12T23:36:30.553-06:00Haha, I'm surprised by the love Crux is gettin...Haha, I'm surprised by the love Crux is getting in the comments! I'm rather fond of him, too, though. I love a man with cheekbones. :pOwl Facehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13697227504678375230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-82262869163919666632013-07-12T20:06:55.243-06:002013-07-12T20:06:55.243-06:00I had to laugh at Luke's "buy a guy dinne... I had to laugh at Luke's "buy a guy dinner first" comment, lol Polly is rather endearing, and while I like Luke well enough, I'm with Heaven, I'm holding out hope for Crux too!<br /><br /> The break in is a bit troubling, I hope Polly isn't in too much danger...Nirarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15253184399668018141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-8151645965146875992013-07-12T00:55:28.498-06:002013-07-12T00:55:28.498-06:00It really flowed well. Any quirkiness comes across...It really flowed well. Any quirkiness comes across as her 'newness' in interacting with and understanding humans. I really wouldn't have guessed dialogue isn't a strong point. You're doing good =)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-2469766975727489052013-07-11T11:54:45.289-06:002013-07-11T11:54:45.289-06:00Thank you! We will find out who did it in due cour...Thank you! We will find out who did it in due course. Luke will return soon, and hopefully him and Polly can work it out. I think he's a doll, too. Dialogue is incredibly difficult for me to write, so I'm glad it didn't seem too forced and that Polaris's quirkiness remained intact. :pOwl Facehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13697227504678375230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-50044975536897345262013-07-11T11:48:10.299-06:002013-07-11T11:48:10.299-06:00I think so, too! I'm really angry at her for t...I think so, too! I'm really angry at her for telling him to leave. >:cOwl Facehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13697227504678375230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-41260637700587010472013-07-10T22:20:47.759-06:002013-07-10T22:20:47.759-06:00This was a great chapter! The TV made me think of ...This was a great chapter! The TV made me think of Crux, but the redecorating seems more likely Eni's work. I guess we'll find out! Luke is a total doll. It's really quite funny how you've captured her forays into human interactions. She's mostly on track, but kinda off in a quirky way, it's awesome. I hope she can figure out what happened soon and have some more Big Mistakes with Luke. But gosh I hope she's not in too much trouble. Could someone else have been after her work? <br /><br />(I had no idea that drink changed sim traits either, good to know!)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-37175253929805346232013-07-10T21:29:40.765-06:002013-07-10T21:29:40.765-06:00Aw, Luke is a cutey! It's too bad Polly has to...Aw, Luke is a cutey! It's too bad Polly has to blow him off, for now at least.yangthecathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15083940950118677312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-43274016314279246792013-07-09T19:54:10.417-06:002013-07-09T19:54:10.417-06:00Haha, Fab!Crux needs to happen. I didn't reali...Haha, Fab!Crux needs to happen. I didn't realize how much Polaris's skintone matched the wallpaper until this chapter. I'll get the mystery decorator to work on that.<br /><br />And why is the Commander scary? Is it the goatee that makes him intimidating? :pOwl Facehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13697227504678375230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-56139458645512377082013-07-09T18:22:27.227-06:002013-07-09T18:22:27.227-06:00Fab! Totally fab Crux! That's who it is. Thoug...Fab! Totally fab Crux! That's who it is. Though I'm pretty sure it's Eni I'm holding out for Fab Crux to walk in and say "Oh Gurrrrrrl! Shut 'yo mouth! Your walls and skintone totally match! Let's get more complimentary color in here! I see Suntones!" with a flick of his wrist and a flash of ultrawhite teeth. (j/k- but that really is in my head after Gem's comment. lol)<br /><br />Though Luke needs to come back and push Polaris up against a wall again. I love the trait change too. So fun! and something EA did that has a genuinely creative element within it.<br /><br />I'm all on pins and needles to see how Polaris finally starts getting out of the Hegemony. The commander is a little scary and it worries me a bit.ShakespearesSunshynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09019826982875949328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-13725046425333859132013-07-09T15:04:25.007-06:002013-07-09T15:04:25.007-06:00Hmmm, I probably won't ever have detailed sex ...Hmmm, I probably won't ever have detailed sex scenes (I'm bad at describing sex, haha) and I don't plan to have anyone swear that much, so I won't include the warning then.<br /><br />A little spoiler (though a happy one): Luke will be back. I can't throw him away like that. I like his mohawk too much. Whether or not they procreate is between them. :p<br /><br />Crux is the correct name, but I really like Ol' Purplely! What a fantastic name. Alternate theory: he's actually sensitive and artistic and he's always wanted to be an interior decorator, so he decided to break into Polly's house and spruce up the place a bit. So, he's either evil or fabulous.Owl Facehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13697227504678375230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-27632602595653917112013-07-09T14:59:45.789-06:002013-07-09T14:59:45.789-06:00Okay, no filter then! I figured people wouldn'...Okay, no filter then! I figured people wouldn't mind swearing. I mean, I live near an elementary school and I hear kids as the walk by my house and they swear more than I do,<br /><br />Haha, now that you mention it I probably should have had Polly mention that the disease is not fatal. Kinslee's response was definitely strange. I feel bad for Luke, too. He just wanted to protect Polly!<br /><br />We can't be too sure who gave Polly the machine. After all, it was signed "A Friend." Polly's bound to have a few friends. :pOwl Facehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13697227504678375230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-47287705404881308692013-07-09T14:53:00.018-06:002013-07-09T14:53:00.018-06:00Thank you so much! I'm writing this partially ...Thank you so much! I'm writing this partially to practice creative writing (I'm used to technical, work-related writing), so it's good to hear that. :D<br /><br />Polly actually interacted with tons of humans, but I decided only to include a few interactions. Unfortunately, a lot of other sims seem to dislike her (possibly because she's inappropriate and childish).Owl Facehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13697227504678375230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-84526467088622708212013-07-09T13:19:00.167-06:002013-07-09T13:19:00.167-06:00You don't need an adult content warning for sw...You don't need an adult content warning for swearing occasionally. If it was like "F** S** F** F** S**" all the way though, then yes, I'd say do it, but I don't think you need one.<br />I've had sex, murder and lots of violence in mine without the warning. It's fund trying to write it in without actually saying anything happened, because then you probably would need the warning ;)<br /><br />:O LUKE!!! Come back!!!<br />No, really. He better not listen to Polly!<br /><br />Like Becky, I don't think Eni was the one who gave her the machine. I think it was... Crux? I can't remember which is which. The purple one. Him. I think ol' purplely did that. He redecorated her place, and then gave her that to show her he's watching. :p Twisted and evil? Yep, definately.<br /><br />Damn, though. Luke is hot. He better come back and for Polly to have his babies, yes?gemly_teddiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16384732672776498936noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-69317230802560526152013-07-08T21:27:42.689-06:002013-07-08T21:27:42.689-06:00Aw man, I hate the filter. Don't use it! xD No...Aw man, I hate the filter. Don't use it! xD No one minds swears! ... Seriously my blog gets away without one, and it has the occasional bad word. And violence.<br /><br />Anyway great chapter! I feel kinda bad for Luke. And I love the look of The Dive. And Lol at Kinslee. My response to someone having a disease I didn't know would probably be panic. I'd worry the teal-skin condition was fatal.<br /><br />Somehow I think Eni wasn't the one responsible for the machine... but maybe I'm just nuts. ^^Beckyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17609229633852230459noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-76800925938771404902013-07-08T20:55:13.728-06:002013-07-08T20:55:13.728-06:00Loved it! Very funny and I love your writing. I...Loved it! Very funny and I love your writing. I'm glad Polly finally got to interact with humans a little. That was very interesting. I'm also glad that Eni is helping her.<br /><br />Can't wait for more.Hoseahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05112344786582178875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-9829498886974939852013-07-08T14:29:01.361-06:002013-07-08T14:29:01.361-06:00The tracking is definitely going to be a problem. ...The tracking is definitely going to be a problem. I'm going to try to address that in the next chapter. Hopefully that'll be ready in a couple of days. :DOwl Facehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13697227504678375230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-3396656625036909902013-07-08T14:25:49.195-06:002013-07-08T14:25:49.195-06:00I've found a few bright colors that click, and...I've found a few bright colors that click, and I use them almost constantly. The table is from the Store (it's called "Theo's Contempo Round Table.") I picked it up with a few spare points and I use it in just about every house I make.Owl Facehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13697227504678375230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-73239042068570554002013-07-08T14:21:11.603-06:002013-07-08T14:21:11.603-06:00Wow, she had a lot of visitors that night didn'...Wow, she had a lot of visitors that night didn't she! I wonder what's going to happen with her mission - the Commander surely knows she's deviating from orders by now, especially since he's been having her tracked and I'm worried what he'll do to herAliHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15088235841224977814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4090175799826850699.post-25111156079032232372013-07-08T14:07:07.856-06:002013-07-08T14:07:07.856-06:00Oh my goodness! I about died when she complained a...Oh my goodness! I about died when she complained about not being able to master shoes with wheels. I'm glad she didn't hook up with Luke though. I'm holding out hope for Crux. <br /><br />I also love her house! I normally shy away from bright colors as I am awful at getting them to "click" together. Her kitchen/dining area just looks so inviting though. Wherever is the table from?heavenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05461257842343457492noreply@blogger.com